Friday, February 10, 2012

PhotoStory Where I am from rough draft


5 comments:

  1. One thing I learned about you from your video is that you garden. Your family is similar to mine because faith is important to us too. The best thing about your video is how heartfelt and emotional it is. I didn't see anything that needs changed. It looks really good!

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  2. One thing I learned about you is...you decorate cakes.
    Your family is similar/different than mine because... I am also divorced.
    The best thing about your digital story is...The colorful pictures.
    One think you could change is......having the music all the way to the end. Looks great!

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  3. One thing I learned about you is that decorate cakes. That is so cool. Your family is similar than mine because you just have a brother and so do I. The best thing about your digital story is the raw honesty. I wouldn't change a thing about your digital story. It's great!

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  4. One thing I learned about you is that you're a talented cake maker and gardener.
    Your family is similar to mine because my mother-in-law makes cakes too!
    The best thing about your digital story is the great photos!
    One thing you could change is to make some of the pictures a little bigger.

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  5. One thing I learned about you is I learn so many things. I love your cakes. Your family is similar than mine because you and your brother have the same love him to death but I might be the cause of his death relationship.
    The best thing about your digital story is it is extremely personal which makes it great.
    One think you could change is length the music which I am sure you are aware of.

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